Perpetual Emotions Poem by Hanna Collins

Perpetual Emotions

Rating: 5.0


Lovingly she caresses the man beneath her,
Fingers gently dancing across his chest,
Swirls and twirls traced along his skin.
‘Neath the moonlight, plays this scene.
Morning comes and with it light,
So begins an angry fight.
Loving caresses turn to scrapes along his chest,
Fingers into fists of fury,
Like a man he takes his beating,
And so begins it all again,
The story of the sea and sand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leigh A. Hill 19 June 2006

what an amazing poem! you compared the two things in a way in i have never thought of before! amazing, love starr

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Dustin Bennefield 23 May 2006

well I see that you are starting as a good writer already good job

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Tracey Collins 21 May 2006

that is so true, men do take all the scratching, from us ladys.

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