Personal Message Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Personal Message

Rating: 5.0


Personal message from reader

'Hussein Smelter”

Really touched by your personality & the poetry, wish & pray for your long life with complete health & prosperity.
Warm regards'

I am overwhelmed
Not by contents read
But by the pure feeling in heart
My heart breathes fast

When will be able to repay?
I shall pray for their well being to stay
It makes me even stronger
To live and love in this life little longer

It makes life worthwhile
And brings lots of smile
If such flowers are garlanded
And make my feet fully landed

So I said in open
And may reiterate it even
That heaven is here
Why to go else where?

You have blessing
To go as never missing
Feel lucky to earn respect
Rest everything may be spoken by act

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2013

Personal message from reader Hussein Smelter” Really touched by your personality & the poetry, wish & pray for your long life with complete health & prosperity. Warm regards

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 October 2013

Re: Personnel message (Score: 1) by Seshat_Nibada on Wednesday, October 09,2013 (21: 04: 55) You do seem to have a tapas of tenderness alive and working in your verse. At the prolific rate you write, it's only a short matter of time before your technique evolves into something very deliberate and spiritually creative.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2013

welcome kucette, maria, yampriye, mari mayang, maria lenn and amshujain a few seconds ago · Unlike

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2013

act speaks.......... PARTHA SARATHI PAULLess than a minute ago The holy GITA ever feeds us with the potion of ' work is worship ' nice job.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2013

sweet poem derek heasley2 minutes ago Very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2013

Yampriy Aashish, Mari Mayang Nihei and 2 others like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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