Personification Of Lord Sun Poem by me poet yeps poet

Personification Of Lord Sun

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I AGAIN RATED IT your poem.. AS A 10 ++++++++++++++++++++POEM JA SIR
As it COVERS
THE BEAUTY OF LORD'S EXISTENCE
PERSONIFIED as in Nature
since eras trillions upon trilliiiiiiiions

years and time were invented only
as a matter of countableyears
since few ages
when man learned the going around
of the Sun
about our Earth

then converted the thought
as we do in a mirror

REFLECTION OF OURSELVES
as in the ZODIAC

Sun is PERMANENTLY CONSIDERED Static
as much as is our
LORD

we all go about
enjoying and sharing Energy
in forms called

Darshan

or

Obeyance

Bow we all
to the LORD SUN

Don't welight candles
inside

Dark caves temples churches and monasteries
and so on

Symbolic of our LORD
the
SUN

OUR GOD

we await as it does rise each morn
then we awake
and
BOW
and say our
prayer
with folded thankful air
our hands

O LORD!

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Monday, September 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,lord,love,poetic expression,sun,temporary life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
SUN IS SYMBOLIC OF LORD
AS
RIVER IS OF ROMANCE
IN LIFE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 17 September 2018

Thanks dear friend, it's a nice poetic critical appreciation.

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Israj Ali 17 September 2018

years and time were invented only as a matter of countable years...a very nice poem.

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opoet me poet 17 September 2018

Thank you Israj Alifor ur maiden visit and rich comments do read my two best poems MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY TODAY LIKE EM U MAY NO U WILL THANKS DO LEAVE a comment kindly

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