I AGAIN RATED IT your poem.. AS A 10 ++++++++++++++++++++POEM JA SIR
As it COVERS
THE BEAUTY OF LORD'S EXISTENCE
PERSONIFIED as in Nature
since eras trillions upon trilliiiiiiiions
years and time were invented only
as a matter of countableyears
since few ages
when man learned the going around
of the Sun
about our Earth
then converted the thought
as we do in a mirror
REFLECTION OF OURSELVES
as in the ZODIAC
Sun is PERMANENTLY CONSIDERED Static
as much as is our
LORD
we all go about
enjoying and sharing Energy
in forms called
Darshan
or
Obeyance
Bow we all
to the LORD SUN
Don't welight candles
inside
Dark caves temples churches and monasteries
and so on
Symbolic of our LORD
the
SUN
OUR GOD
we await as it does rise each morn
then we awake
and
BOW
and say our
prayer
with folded thankful air
our hands
O LORD!
take CARE
years and time were invented only as a matter of countable years...a very nice poem.
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks dear friend, it's a nice poetic critical appreciation.