Friday, December 5, 2008

Pet Snakes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Suckle with milk
Snakes don’t thank
Sting your own nipples
Buck up recusants
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Sathya Narayana
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Fay Slimm 15 December 2008

Clever alternative use of word power here Sathya - and of course has the appeal of accepted wisdom too --- a 10

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Min Sia 15 December 2008

You don't have to look outside to find traitors..they usually on your side..like snakes..an opportunist...waiting in your park.. Very nice concept..and vivid words.. True wisdom within.. Thanks for sharing...

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A wonderful poem. U get 10++.............

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