Ph: Faith: The Ball's Always In God's Court Comments

TOO numb, last line: did you want in or not in this line? i like the rhyming and the similar stanza-ending lines. ToDo....meaning? i think this could be ok, but i'm too lazy and it's too late to check i especially liked the first two stanzas. Poet's Notes is interesting but does not shed any more light on the poem's meaning for me. it may be too philosophical for me? bri :)

Brian, I love this one.....you've treated a profound truth in a fun way. As my British-born friend would say, Good on ya mate!