Ph: Haiku: Garden Varmints Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Haiku: Garden Varmints

Rating: 5.0


#1
rat with bushy tail
mesh trap black hole for squirrels
swimming school failures

#2
rat with bushy tail
mesh trap black hole for squirrels
snorkel malfunction

#3
rat with bushy tail
mesh trap black hole for squirrels
fresh meat for supper

#4
rat with bushy tail
mesh trap black hole for squirrels
tomorrow’s compost

Thursday, October 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston
October 22,2015
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

Nice haiku..........Very well written.....10+++++++ I invite u to read my haikus, Thanks.

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