Ph: Life: The Unknown Heart Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Life: The Unknown Heart

Rating: 5.0


Dare to explore the unknown heart,
It's virtues for to sing.
Vistas grand and sweeping,
If entrusted to your keeping,
Could make your heart take wing…
Then wouldn't you feel smart?

Dare to explore the untamed heart,
To bite back it's able,
No doubt that it's weeping,
But the loyalty there sleeping,
Might yet grace your table,
If you just took their part.

Dare to explore the unclaimed heart,
Even if it's your own,
Ask your friends what they feel,
To find out if your feeling's real,
Show them your heart's not stone,
And feel your own life start!

Sunday, June 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston
June 15,2014

Additional voting or rating of this poem can be done by simply including your vote in a comment on the poem. I will update my poems rating later in a way that blocks Merov from altering the points given to the poem by more friendly reviewers. Apperantly the only number keys that work on Merov's computer are 0 and 1.: -) Poor Merov.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tristan Love-day 17 June 2014

I love your poem, good work, keep it up :) , I saw you giving advice to someone in your comment and I was wondering if you could check my poem and tell me if there is anything wrong, thanks: D

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Kanav Justa 15 June 2014

a wonderful ending in this poem, , , Dare to explore the unclaimed heart, Even if it's your own, Ask your friends what they feel, To find out if your feeling's real, Show them your heart's not stone, And feel your own life start

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