Ph: Love: Now That You've Gone - 1 Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Love: Now That You've Gone - 1

Rating: 5.0


Oh the air is not so sweet today,
Nor, I fear, will it be tomorrow,
For disgruntled love has left the fray
Of tortured wills that brought both sorrow.

Are yesterdays now just memories,
(Though some still may lie sweet on the tongue) ?
Times' mists flood our love like tsunamis, '
Burying fields that were green and young.

And just where is it that we've run to,
All our doubts, fears, and loss to allay?
Is there sunlight, warmth, and a great view?
Do we cower in caves of dismay?

Being alone is always a choice,
The choice to love should be as easy!
Both suffer times when we lose our voice,
We sweat when our garden's not breezy.

If your leaving me was just a dream
Then I'm sure I'd know just what to do
I'd full rig my sails till just abeam
Then latch down all my gunnels to you.

The ships we've sailed have known different seas
And full different arms manned the tiller,
Compass our guide, we go where we please,
Our lives are our own, not just filler.

Now, by my hide, we've much to decide
If sun finds us still hitched tomorrow,
We're both crusty, not here for a ride,
What's lacking we'll certainly ‘borrow.'

But say I borrow you and you me,
And betwixt us no party owning,
Could it be we might both then feel free….?
Blow me down! Her vows she's intoning!

Sunday, April 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston
April 26,2014

A special note of thanks here to a new friend, the Poet Yash Shinde, who I have been trying to lure away from 'Old English' in his own poetry. Now it seems his 'bad influence' has lured me into temptation as well. I was looking for a word to rhyme with 'dream' and 'abeam' popped into my brain. The rest is now history and, I have to admit, it was fun. Yash calls it 'Pirate Talk.' I hope my 'Nautical English' is not too ''far off the beam? 'Ha!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgios Venetopoulos 05 May 2014

Exceptional expression, intelligent handling of the language and syntax, and an impressive result. Very good poem, sir. G.

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Unwritten Soul 28 April 2014

This work has it own sentimental value, because i found you have writen it by heart which you felt it and drown words and place it here to be read, yes you exhibiting your mind and feeling...it is good one, you know poem is a media to tell what we have inside either we realize it or not..thus i appreciate this poem, i can grab the feel inside the words..._Soul

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