Monday, April 7, 2014

Ph: Love: She Never Chose Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

She really never chose me as a friend.
At least not to my knowledge publicly,
(‘Or any other, ' she once claimed to me) .
Her photo album empty but for those
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Brian Johnston
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Gia Jokhadze 15 April 2014

Brian, this is amazing!

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Tanya Gupta 11 April 2014

wonderfull write...your content and feelings always come up and leave a long lasting effect on every poet like me... but as in concern of this poems i'll say love just happens and it does'nt need anything in exchange..... all in all love is wonderfull..is all i can say. keep writing to encourage and to inspire poets like me.. thanks a lot for this wonderfull write!

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Roseann Shawiak 11 April 2014

Brian, this poem is fantastic! Love it - another 10 - 10's! Intriguing poem, mysterious, it makes me want to know who this person is, that doesn't return your love. Maybe they are not really aware of how much you care. Why don't you just come out and say the truth of your heart to them, so there's no mistaking who you are speaking about in your poetry. Keep on writing Brian, I'm still reading and enjoying it. RoseAnn

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

a passionate write..............to decipher this one, u require time and emotions.that's what makes it beautiful........

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Unwritten Soul 08 April 2014

I would say give the rose to the land that can grows it not the land that kill it...then u see more bloom comes than drying petals_Soul

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