mind makes mistakes, but mistakes make a better mind.
Today, reading the poems of Tanya Gupta I learnt something sure metaphors and similes are lovely but truly what moves people are uplifting messages punctuation and spelling are always appreciated but if you convey a reader's heart that's the most important part
Hi Tanya, just read When, a very interesting work and very true, hope you don't mind i added you to my friends.
I fully agree with Spriha, your nine poems have left a deep impression on me............ There's much, people over here should learn from you! Lovely.......
nice poems. you are great in showing feels.that shows a good improvement. i invite you to read my poems at my poets page. that is a friendly invitation
Read all your poems. I am quite impressed. I am sure your language and thought will take you to the height you rightly deserve.
Your poems go deep into human psyche...the lucid language matching appropriate thoughts took my heart away...keep writing my love..
I Am Not A God
Hey, i am a person,
A person of equation,
An equation of truth,
A truth of life,
A life of god,
And ofcourse not, i am not a GOD.
I know i am walking,
Not walking but running,
Running for my dreams,
My dreams of truth,
And obviously on my running way,
Somewhere i have lost my way,
My way of life,
Now i am too far from the truth,
The truth of my life,
The life of god,
And ofcourse not i am not a GOD.
One day, i thought,
I thought of the world,
The world of misfortune,
Not misfortune but the misdeeds,
Misdeeds of truth,
The truth of my life,
The life of god,
And ofcourse not i am not a GOD.
What if i will not get happiness,
Happiness does'nt meant to get, its all about to observe,
To observe a friend in yourself,
A friend of grattitude,
Grattitude which is the greatest attitude,
Attitude of being with truth,
The truth of life,
The life of god,
And ofcourse not i am not a GOD.
I cannot achieve all my dreams,
Dreams are meant to be broken,
With the peice of my broken heart,
I am going to establish peace.
If I won't, i'll establish another world,
A world of being in an order,
An order of happiness,
Happiness of being with truth,
The truth of life,
The life of god,
And ofcourse not i am not a GOD.
Sometimes i think i am a game,
A game of bluffs and steadiness,
From the shore of steadiness in geting causes,
Causes of pains,
Pains of loving,
Loving own life and world,
The world of consideration,
The consideration of misery,
The misery of happiness,
The happiness of a non-truth,
The truth of life,
The life of god,
And ofcourse not i am not a GOD.
For my mean,
I cannot modify the things,
Those things are so monstrous to be changed,
The change could not be the sudden,
Not so sudden as a day,
Not so the day could be moralistic,
The moralistic can only be the end,
The end of sorrow,
The sorrowness of truth,
The truth of life,
The life of god,
And ofcourse not i am not a GOD.
No one can take anything by the end of life,
But i wish i could,
I wish i could take a single saculam,
A seculam of the saccharin things of life,
Things that could strap the morals of my end,
The morals of stiffness,
The stiffness of truth,
The truth of life,
The life of god,
And ofcouse not i am not a GOD.
I want to live my life with courage and convictions,
The courage of knowing myself,
And the conviction of winning the world.
The world where i can step harmoney,
Harmoney which can spread a fragrance,
A fragrance of true love,
True love for everything that surrounds something.
Something which can mould the truth,
The truth of my life,
The life of god,
But no, ofcourse not i am not a GOD,
But a person of GOD.
I have only read 9 poems by you and i see a shining star! ! I should definitely learn something from you: P All the BEst for future..! ! ~ Spriha