Phil Bart Kills Me Comments

Ted! do NOT let the Bad Guy get you down..........You are the winner, the honest, trusting soul.....excellent write, great form of release of pain.......hugs, marci.xo~~~

This is very well written Ted - it's no mean feat to be able to reign in genuine anger well enough to write a good poem, but you've managed it here. Hugs Anna xxx

I like this Ted. In one sense the humour seems to be the obvious but it has a very skilled narration to it.