Phoenix Poem by Anindya Mukhopadhyay

Phoenix



war between Self and Soul
results in
no work done, for
no displacement occurs
repeat physics; yet efforts wasted
in winding the clock
and a whale of time
elapsed in indecision.

Self is the shit
others make you believe.
what you are: you cannot know
unless you listen to your Soul.
still many
echoes the dead
blindly unto death
climbs the winding staircase:
your goal obscure.

Soul is that eternal flame
set ablaze by dreams
that cannot speak-
burning deep in distress: everytime
gravity pulls me down into Hell,
with His help
and belief in Self
i rise up like Phoenix from the ashes
again and again…

(First composed: July,2017)

Sunday, April 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: self,dilemma,existentialism,soul
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As an ardent reader of Yeats's poems and admirer of his "system" and style, ‘Phoenix' is inspired from Yeats's ‘A Dialogue of Self and Soul', though in no way plagiarized. The poem is not in dialectic form as of Yeats's. The speakers are passive too.

‘Phoenix' is an original work that presents the eternal conflict between Self and Soul and the constant dilemma of a common man as to which of them should be preferred or have precedence over the other.

Detached from the body the soul may have no existence, so the individual cannot do without either but choose to balance between both: ‘with His help and belief in Self/I rise up' the poet concludes.

The poem portrays frantic effort of every distressed human to survive the battle between his sensuality and spirituality that tears asunder his heart. His agonizing cry to ascend to Heaven from the depths of Hell leaves us all in tears. The symbol of ‘Phoenix' is highly suggestive in this context.

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