Monday, April 4, 2005

Photocopying My Driver's License Comments

Rating: 3.5

I set the brightness to one bar
and see in the face that slides onto the paper tray
the moment before Hiroshima
flickered––the eyes narrowing, diminishing to pupils
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Sean McDowell
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Brian Jani 24 May 2014

Lol Sean, I'm a fan of this poem

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Poetry Hound 04 April 2005

This is the best poem posted today, in my humble opinion. It has strong imagery and symbolism, and has good flow and economy of word usage. I like how it presents a novel perspective. Just great.

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Sean McDowell

Sean McDowell

Tucson, AZ
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