I set the brightness to one bar
and see in the face that slides onto the paper tray
the moment before Hiroshima
flickered––the eyes narrowing, diminishing to pupils
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This is the best poem posted today, in my humble opinion. It has strong imagery and symbolism, and has good flow and economy of word usage. I like how it presents a novel perspective. Just great.
Lol Sean, I'm a fan of this poem