David Wood

Gold Star - 13,745 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

Picnic Under An English Oak (Ottava Rima) - Poem by David Wood

We meander through meadows of blazing corn
Sit under ancient oaks now dry in the sun
The dry hot summer making flowers forlorn
An everlasting drought that that took all the fun
Under its canopy in the early morn
We sit entwined our two hearts beating as one
Thoughts of love flowing rampantly through my head
But the sight of your husband filled me with dread

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Ottava rima is an Italian stanza (not on PH poetry form) of eight 11 syllable lines with a rhyme scheme of ABABABCC
There can be more than one stanza

Comments about Picnic Under An English Oak (Ottava Rima) by David Wood

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/11/2015 10:05:00 AM)

    nice portrayal of nature and a lover's desire. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/11/2015 6:02:00 AM)

    Wow.........Nicely written......enjoyed the humour. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 11, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 12, 2015

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