Thursday, November 3, 2005

Playboy Comments

Rating: 2.2

Me they should Employ
To be a Playboy
The girls would jump for Joy
Running up and down the halls in the Savoy
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David Darbyshire
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Shane Clawson 14 December 2007

what a topic to write about.. men seeking playboy....keep writing!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 November 2005

I think the rhymes would work if they were well done. H

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Michael Philips 03 November 2005

Men wearing the Playboy ears is a funny thought. Nice idea. However, I don't think your poem works very well. The rhyming detracts.

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