Please... Be With Me Poem by Devanshu Patel

Please... Be With Me



Please... Be with me

Please... Be with me
and stay in my heart!
Let me feel
The beats of your heart!
Let me attune
My heart with yours!
Please...let me feel
The oneness that cures!
Let me touch
The tenderness of the core!
And let me sing
your love that is pure!

Please....be with me
And stay in my heart!
....be with me, please!
And never depart!

© Devanshu Patel

Friday, January 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2019

PERCEPTIONAL LOVE motivates mind but DIVINE LOVE motivates mind towards higher realm of God. When Greatest Divine Love remains in mind we feel God's grace in every heart beat. Tenderness awakens with inner conscience and it motivates life with beauty of dignity of spiritual life. A great worthy poem is excellently penned is timely treasured. This poem too deserves full 100/100 marks for lovable philosophical effort.

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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