Past, A Treasure? Poem by Devanshu Patel

Past, A Treasure?

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Past, a Treasure?


There's nothing like sinking in the past!
If fine, makes us feel flew away fast!
It's a real treasure,
It gives sheer pleasure,
Fools, ignore present, wish to be recast!

© Devanshu Patel
1/10/2019

Thursday, January 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: memoirs,past,pleasure,reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by poet friend Jez's 'Cinquain (Old Times) '
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 March 2019

Fools, ignore present, wish to be recast! live now and today...... past does not exist future comes.. if i do not live now, then who will live instead of me? great thought dear Devanschu

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2019

Past never shrinks although disappears. The past gathers many memories for us. Fools ignore but wise people remember these. Amazing poem is well penned.10

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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