Please Don'T Poem by kaitlin skelding

Please Don'T



You scream She screams
I sit huddled in a corner tears pour like a waterfall
I go to my room she comes in and comforts me
You come in more screaming i start to cry again when you
talk of suicide i can't live with out i run into your arms and cry
Please don't kill yourself i can't live without my daddy i don't know what i do without you you rub my back i look up oh my good i hit nerves seeing you cry for the first time i love you and Please don't

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kaitlin Skelding 23 June 2009

i'm sorry to say this but this is based on a true part of my life

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Sage of Time 13 August 2008

thats so sad but brilliant....it makes me want to cry

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Lazarus Knix 11 August 2008

Very, VERY powerful. The running, frantic undertone you gave this poem really emotionally affected me.

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