Please Don'T Leave And Take Those Eyes Away Poem by Patti Masterman

Please Don'T Leave And Take Those Eyes Away

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Please don't leave and take those eyes away-
Though days are long and hard, I know they must be,
But I depend on those, their lonely truth I see;
Please don't leave and take those eyes away.

Please don't leave, I see a brighter day;
Where all things work together, and I know
That in time we'll grow together, you and me-
Please don't leave and take those eyes away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

Finally you found eyes so truthful.Alas you might have discovered truth from the debris of lies where truth wants to sleep as truth.Truth is immobile yet.Lies have automation.Well done.

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Jim Troy 10 September 2011

I love to comment on this one about the eyes. One of the first comtact points I ever do focus on is the depth of the eyes. Are they seeing, is anybody home, are they smiling, are they joining me. They can be the only communication necessary in an encounter, they can cause a heart to race, or a fever to grow cold. Thank you for writing about 'those eyes'... I like it a lot Jim Troy

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