Please Help Me Poem by Omar Hatem

Please Help Me

Rating: 5.0


Please help me to continue this life
Without you it’s the end off my life
You gave me hope when no body could
You made me alive again in this life
You made me feel when no body can listen or hear

Please help me to continue my life
I wanna tell you how much I love you
I wanna hear you when no bodies want
I wanna see you until the day I die
I wanna feel you until I can’t feel
I wanna kiss you until my lips get dry
I wanna hug you until my arms get tired

Please help me to continue my life
Without you it’s the end off my life
Without you how can I fall in love again?
My love to you can’t be written down
My love for you can’t be understand by words
They say that im crazy but im crazy off you

Please help me to continue this life
Without you it’s the end off my life
You are in my heart you are in my mind so please be mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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