Poet: 2020 Poem by DM W

Poet: 2020

Rating: 5.0


The words, at first, issued forth fluently:
Nourished by the elements and seasons.
From esoteric symbols, he drew deeply.
He wished to transcend cold realms ofreason.
But now it's more like an uphill struggle,
As he tries to work out this complex world;
Where once he was clear, now he's muddled.
He no longer soars freely like wild birds.

Tuesday, June 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 09 June 2020

'He no longer soars freely like wild birds.' Excellent choice of words and expression. There are a few ways to interpret your poem Dominic, but some things are best left unsaid for that would ruin the mystery. 10++ and thank you so much.

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Dominic Windram 10 June 2020

Thanks Shaun...I'm referring to myself and my own struggles here if that helps.

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