Saturday, January 30, 2016

Poet's Highlighter Comments

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My Highlighter lacks expressions
To make my thoughts mightier
Form created in my mind
Lost in the mackenzie river
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Jimoh Ibrahim
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A creative composition my friend.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 February 2016

That's an interesting read. You have expressed yourself well by using the Nature imagery. And ceased not from writing...the poem ends on an optimistic note. Nicely written.

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