Poor Girl Poem by Jessica Fellows

Poor Girl



When life is over; you can’t get it back

That is when you see nothing, but black

Just a poor girl who can’t even ask

Why she didn’t have enough time to finish her task



It was not a fault or blame

I guess It was her time to blow out the flame

Or she has lost the game

Life is a time that is impossible to tame



You are given two choices

Hold back or speak your voices

It’s hard to work hard

You have to be smart and play the right card



Light your path and walk

Leaving your life clean as chalk

Clear, white, plain, simple

She was so cute, the little dimple



Poor girl, who didn’t know what was coming her way

Nor was it her last day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I'm a little unsure about what you are trying to say, but it seems like you are telling people to keep living on. It was interesting and I really liked it either way.

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Miss Rainbow 19 February 2010

thats reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly good i liked that part about two choices

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Kee Thampi 11 February 2010

You are given two choices Hold back or speak your voices words mixed with a freelance

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