Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Poverty And Doorways Comments

Rating: 5.0

Confused though I am
as to which came before,
which second,
the door or the poor,
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Douglas Scotney
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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2021

A thought provoking little work... wonderful

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Paul Brookes 22 November 2018

An interesting write words can be confusing or have different meanings I love the parallel. poor and doorway poor huddles in door way circular words great job enjoyed

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Michael Walker 21 November 2018

You did thorough research to write this. I too have often wondered about the word 'dervish'.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2018

The door of the poor confuses. This poem is very thought provoking and amazingly penned.10

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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