Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Power Unlimited Comments

Rating: 4.9

Feral winds of unimaginable change
Blow into our days at will, reminding
Us, love can be blind. Fate rearranges
Strangely shaped new ties, unbinding
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Fay Slimm
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nice form.. the form normally don't take on such power. but you made it! wow!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 June 2009

Powerful and sharp composition

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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

informative and highly significant to one and all, , ideas are nicely set, fine write..10++

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Sandra Martyres 10 June 2009

A very powerful piece Fay...10+

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the force keeping the world in balance as per science is the force of attraction..finding love in that attraction makes human sense

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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