Thursday, December 7, 2017

Praised Be The Light Comments

Rating: 4.3

" And the darkness could not extinguish the Light." (The Gospel of John: Chapter 1)

Praised be the consoling light that protects:
The light of sanctuary from the darkest fear;
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Shaun Cronick 06 October 2020

Dominic, a poem, a prayer and a people's mantra all in one. So well written with not a single word wasted or deemed out of place. With each one carrying over to its neighbour and al the time building magnificently to your mesmerising closure line. A full score so richly deserved. Take care. Many thanks for sharing and a great poem with this great theme is one that is few and far between.

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Dominic Windram 12 October 2020

Thanks Shaun...I'm pleased with the way I used anaphora for dramatic effect.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2020

Blessed be the warm light that unites: The light of grace; of silent communion The light which dissolves the boundaries between us. light which dissoves boundaries. a fine image. thank you very much. Dominic. dear. tony

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 07 December 2017

Let the light lead everybody with the note of happiness. Good

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