Precious Being Her Shoe. Poem by Pradeep Uthaman

Precious Being Her Shoe.

Rating: 5.0


There is a man unknown to the world,
Who is capable of loving all changing phase of her;
From dream to seed, to bud and flower,
With the true depth to last of his breath.

Yet remained as precious as a shoe;
Hidden, down to earth, bearing all the weight.
And Taking all the pain, hits, and sorrows,
Wear and tear and following everywhere.

But always an outsider;
Standing the sun, the rain and the cold.
And waiting for her to return the next morning;
Just to feel the touch of her feet again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 28 March 2022

And your beautiful endearing paintings merged with the mood of the poem and enhanced its poetic beauty. Accentuated the aesthetic experience of the reader. So thoughtful of you… Top score.

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Pradeep Uthaman 31 March 2022

Thanks... The Art.. I drew digitally... It resembles an impossible love.. But inevitable... Follow me on insta @memoriesarefrozen

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 March 2022

Hi Pradeep, a wonderfully enigmatic poem. By refusing to reveal the identity of "Her" you have created a magical atmosphere for the poem. I identified'Her' with nature…

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Pradeep Uthaman 31 March 2022

She is the Nature, the wind, river, ocean and many more. This is an impossible love we know as we are from different habitats, yet we keep it alive, even when we are miles apart.

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