Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 818,021 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Precisely - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Precisely

Is poetry game of words?
Or is it coming direct from lord's mouth?
I think it is god gift
In your presentation nothing important is left out

We are part of the soil
Who avail?
The fragrance of flower
And share rainy water

When air is free!
Land is growing freedom trees
Why we spread dragnet of bondage?
And create unbearable phase

So we write and highlight
Express thoughts as right
Give one sort of expression
For people to judge and create compassion

Poetry is simple expression
In a way to humble submission
With no show of talent
But only condition prevailing at present

We highlight no glory
But worry
About plight of poor
Who knock daily from door to door?

We cry
And try our sentiments
To be expressed precisely
It is aired purposely

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/13/2017 11:38:00 PM)

    welcome poetry world
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2017 9:53:00 PM)

    Anwer Ghani True
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2017 10:38:00 AM)

    welcome roy mark azanza
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2017 10:38:00 AM)

    welcome patel manthan
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2017 8:29:00 AM)

    We cry
    And try our sentiments
    To be expressed precisely
    It is aired purposely
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 13, 2017



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