Sunday, September 14, 2008

Prelude! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Go beyond the days of primrose face
Along love and life cherished all the spice:
Knitted sweet memories; amused profile of past;
A mesmerized hackneyed travail towards slope to fall-
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Moushumi moushumi
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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 October 2008

A beautiful poem with nice metaphor. 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 21 September 2008

an excellent poem built on strong imageries...the line 'man’s build reveals the ignorance of prophet’s notch' is revealing brilliant...well done, Mousumi 10

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