Go beyond the days of primrose face
Along love and life cherished all the spice:
Knitted sweet memories; amused profile of past;
A mesmerized hackneyed travail towards slope to fall-
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an excellent poem built on strong imageries...the line 'man’s build reveals the ignorance of prophet’s notch' is revealing brilliant...well done, Mousumi 10
A beautiful poem with nice metaphor. 10+