Sunday, October 25, 2015

Pride - Is A 'stick' Comments

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Pride - is a 'stick' that even itself can curb.
'I' - is self-managed, but nevertheless is driven.
Publican 'waiting forever, ' the soul by doubt twirl -
'Childish mind games' - before you're entombed forever.
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Liza Sud
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2015

Pride is a vice that creates harm, so nicely depicted. Beautiful poem.- - - - 10? ? , , , , , , , , , ,

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M Asim Nehal 25 October 2015

Pride and ego are the worst enemy of humans, they damage more than anything, there is a thin line between self pride and ego....Nice poem Liza, I liked it.10 on 10.

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