Prison Poem by Sofia Moreno

Prison

Rating: 5.0


I look around me,
People talk and laugh,
they are unaware...
But still I remember,
and keep thinking
of those who faith doesn't keep.
I am in a prison
Damn, it's called bloody flesh
It's so real I can't even hold my breath.
Friends, family even society,
They all fail to change me,
my mind is fixed, don't you see?
What do they want of me?
I'm giving my life and soul.
I just hope I get used to this pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 16 August 2007

i love the way you present the pain, the feelings and the agony of a prisoner..nicely penned..

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Rajaram Ramachandran 10 August 2007

There is no absolute freedom for life, which is bound by so many attachments. A poem nicely presented about the imprisoned life.

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Alan Curtis 09 August 2007

You shouldent gotta take that kind of pain.No one should.I like the detail.Great stuff Sofia! Peace, Alan

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