Prison Of Silence Poem by Jordonni Sings

Prison Of Silence

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I'm in this Prison of Silence,
Is there something in it for me?
I'm in this Prison of Silence,
I don't want to be a tree.

I'm in this Prison of Silence,
I wish people wouldn't be offended by me.
I'm in this Prison of Silence,
I believe one person has a key.

I'm in this Prison of Silence,
I just want to be free.
I'm in this Prison of Silence,
I believe I will be free.

Prison Of Silence
Thursday, July 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: free mind,prison,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 06 July 2017

A good start with a hope of freedom. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 06 July 2017

Welcome to this Forum, Jordonni Sings. Nice introspective poem- probing the inner world but with a promise to change the situation. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2017

Welcome to PoemHunter. Wishing you all the best to write more poems here like this amazing poem. Yes, silence amazes mind very often through perception. Tree is like prisoner in land of silence and you do not want to be like a tree. Free mind seems to be freedom. Yes, there is key to silence and this key is freedom. Very neatly drafted and shared this poem is here. Excellent one! ...10

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Jordonni Sings 07 July 2017

Thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 July 2017

tree like men, life like tree - the best.

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