Prom Queen Poem by XxAmieLee xX

Prom Queen

Rating: 5.0


She shows up, her look is a jewel,
she attracts attention, she makes the guys drool.

But the other girls, are blinded by rage,
they've been outdone by someone their own age.

They pull her hair, they rip her dress,
she no longer looks like a goddess.

Then, out of the blue, a guy appears,
he's the most gorgeous guy she's seen in years.

He takes her hand and says to her:
'You're the most beautiful girl I've ever seen,
will you be my prom queen? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 23 May 2008

A lovely 'happily ever after' story that lifts the heart. I wonder who she is? I'm sure she's someone you know. Perhaps someone you've seen in the mirror. I hope so. Like the way you've structured your poem The couplets work really well. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 May 2008

yet a lovely poem by the heart soul when revels inthe gleams of love......................beautiful imagery of love looking luscious green, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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