XxAmieLee xX

Look What You'Ve Done

Look at me here
Lying on the floor
I'm forever changed
Look what you've done

You loved me and left me
I love you and mourn you
Look what you've done

I said that I loved you
You didn't believe me
Look what you've done

Look at me here
I'm a better person
Look what you've done

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 5, 2007
Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 5, 2011

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  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (5/27/2015 9:20:00 PM)

    I have just read this beautiful poem of yours. The poem starts with a feeling of devastation and ends with a feeling of resurrection. So nice!

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (5/28/2008 7:30:00 PM)

    I really liked this because you transformed a singular
    emotion into a transforming experience. That is the
    residue of cruelty. A magnificent statement done in repetition.
    wonderful poetic device. I much approve.

    GW62

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  • Red Blooded Black Hearted (9/12/2007 10:57:00 PM)

    Strength, something that poem had a lot of. Great work Amie.

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  • Carmela May (9/9/2007 11:35:00 PM)

    Amy this poem is GREAT. I know that me and my friends don't really talk to you at school much but right now I feel your Pain. So yer Me and Emma like your poems keep at it.

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