Addictions..........They Kill Poem by XxAmieLee xX

Addictions..........They Kill

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You're worse than a drug,
I'm addicted to you,
I need you with me all the time,
I go crazy without you.

I'd die without you,
I'm addicted to you,
I love the feeling you give me,
I need that feeling all the time.

I'm dead now, all because
I was addicted to you,
I had an overdose,
And now I regret even touching you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Weischedel 17 September 2007

Man, this is another oustanding poem I have read from you Amie! Excellent write. Always, Linda

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Alison Cassidy 18 September 2007

Addiction - yes, a great metaphor for love. Your poem is written with great passion and honesty. Look forward to more. love, Allie xxxx

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Yonela Mali 15 October 2007

you are so young and yet your work is beautiful. this is excellent......love Yonela

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Jessica Jemima 27 April 2008

Yes, great metaphor. An addiction is a terrible thing. Cool stuff, don't stop!

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love and death 21 September 2008

hey there, i understand what u meant by this poem but i also feel the same way but for a different reason. well done

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Tanya Stanford 28 August 2008

wow. Very impactful dramatic poem. Lovely.

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Bootiful Kid 24 July 2008

i love this poem! ! ! good write! ! !

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Anonymous Thoughts 22 June 2008

i can relate... but its a tad clichee

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its not over yet 15 June 2008

great poem! nicely written

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