Promise Poem by Jerrell Frazier

Promise

Rating: 4.5


You are amazing in so many ways. You're truely my first love, as well as my only love. I promise that forever. Without you, I'm hardly anything. You make me smile with all the sweet things you say and do. It's like we're so perfect and I never want any of this to change. I promise to stay with you through any and everything. I'm not gunna give up on you. It's like everything about you is perfect- smile, laugh, voice, eyes, abs, hugs, EVERYTHING. I have never felt so in love before in my life. I think about you 24/7- I don't think there's ever a second when you're not on my mind. You make me complete. So never leave me empty. Ever second I spend with you is cherished beyond belief. You are THE ONE for me. Me only. I love you so much baby. I promise you that. I also promise to be faithful, commited, and loving. I won't break them, I swear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amrit Rathi 24 May 2010

Your poem shines with the intense feelings of a lover as if photogenic! I gave 8/10.Thanks for inviting

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Nickey Mason 23 May 2010

i likey /very detailed/ n this is the same way i feel about my love

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