Promise Poem by HB Rita

Promise

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I promise you that
I will never forget you
Even I am turning into blue
I promise you that
I will count my breathe on you
With the smile of white rain-dew
I promise you that
I will let you lean on my shoulder
With gentle care when you'r older
I promise you that
I will clean the tears when you cry
It is time to give demon good bye
I promise you that
I will take you on my lap if you fall
Just keep me inside you; that's all
I promise you that
I will never dare to make you cry
Tears with grief will fly in the sky
I promise you that
I will lighten you up once again
Fears will stream down the drain
But,
I can't promise you that
I will never cry for you
Will never be awaken on a darkest night and pale
Can't promise you that
There will never be a moment when I creep to reach you up high
Can't promise you that I will never fall with grief and pain
I Just can't promise you that I will never cut my veins
And enjoy the gratification of blood Because you left me alone!
Baby! I think I love you!

Sunday, March 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2019

With the smile of white rain-dew I promise you that I will let you lean on my shoulder With gentle care when you'r older... But... after this 'But', it pained me to read along. may God bless you and care for you and take away all your sufferings and turn everything into positive notes.. Only God can do that, i am sure. thank u dear poetess. Tony

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HB Rita 10 April 2019

I love how you connect your thoughts to God Almighty with faith and gratitude.

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