Promise Poem by rashika lacey

Promise

Rating: 5.0


When the visions around u bring tears to ur eyes
And all that surrounds u are secrets and lies
I'll b ur faith I'll give u love
I will take u in my arms
And hold u right were u belong
On this day my life is with u
This i promise u

I've loved u since forever
In life times b4
And i promise u never will u hurt anymore
I give u my word i give u my heart
This is a battle we won and with vow
Foever has begun
Just close ur eyes each loving day
And know this feelings won't go away
Til the day my life is through
This i promise u

Over and over i fall when i hear u call
without u in my life it just won't b the same at all
That's why you'll stay close right here in my arms
Til the day my life is through
This i promise u

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 08 February 2012

Another great poem, like it.

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Dave Walker 08 February 2012

Like it, a nice flowing poem.

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Romeo Della Valle 08 February 2012

Wow! Rashika! Bravo! What straight forward love confession! I hope he would correspond to you the right way! Thank you for sharing this thought provoking write that clearly shows your love and passion in addition to your talent! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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