Promises Poem by Cyrus Diaz

Promises

Rating: 3.5


Promises are
relationship's goal
it's every lovers
pledge and vow -
unfortunately,
not all goals
are achieved,
so promises too.
Promises are meant
to be taken, and
be taken for granted.
Promises, are but
superficial words,
yet to be proven.
In the long run,
the things you have
accomplished yet,
were not promised
is counted the greatest.

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Farah Ilyas 12 May 2011

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