Proofreader(For Jan) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Proofreader(For Jan)

Rating: 5.0


Running a high temp
reality(as I know it)

melting before me

I am about eye level
with your right breast

as you type nakedly

I watch as your nipple
follows eagerly

everything you type

as if at any moment
it would

shout out

'You left a comma out! '
(or correct is spelt incorrectly) .

It bobs before me
a diligent proofreader

as your words
turn into poems

&
I

...pass out!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doral Deepset 17 January 2009

Hee hee and hee. What a unique viewpoint on what lies before you or maybe you were just delerious? Hot stuff! Doral

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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