Psych Ward Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Psych Ward Tanka



footsteps fading
down the dimly lit hallway
of a psych ward
my niece's room of her own
shrinks to black and white

Monday, June 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: illness,psychological,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 June 2019

A beautiful Tanka on psychological ground is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Nika Mcguin 10 June 2019

I imagine that the speaker is visiting her niece at a psych ward, probably for the first time. I can only imagine that it must feel like a strange, saddening, out of body experience. Well captured in so few lines.

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