Elizabeth Tyease Collins

Rookie - 83 Points (December 22,1992 / Trenton, NJ)

.psychotic Love. - Poem by Elizabeth Tyease Collins

My eyes hide secrets.

The thought of us sets me aflame and Im ashamed to say that my heart still beats,
slowly beats,
for your satanic touch in which misery caresses my self-hate.

I've thought of this image as a way of showing love,
shedding blood spatter across newly painted walls,
I've screamed enough and I've dealt with enough shit to know how I feel so don't judge me.

The simple imagery of the same hearts bleeding in unison sends the devils heart into flames,
I've thought about you so much it makes the acids within my stomach bubble,
makes heaven and hell compete for the tides on which my heart sways,
putting out its internal flames.

It's love I tell you,
pure,
intential,
suicidal,
psychotic love,
and I know you can't leave me,
because I've left signs of your remains as things of the past


Comments about .psychotic Love. by Elizabeth Tyease Collins

  • (2/8/2010 9:24:00 PM)


    as even from my absence from this site your writings are always transforming and reforming into perfection....awesome poem as things never changed :) (Report) Reply

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  • (1/30/2010 6:39:00 PM)


    wow... i give you a 10/10... keep writing. i love your poems (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2010 8:40:00 PM)


    what a sweet piece is this one..i read and liked and let me say you are doing a good job..best of luck 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Adam Reed (1/26/2010 12:10:00 PM)


    dayyuummmm girl. that was THE SHIT! ! ! i really liked the beginning with my eyes hide secrets and i freakin loved the inbetween rhyme catches with 'aflame and im ashamed' that was truly badass. hope u write more soon =) (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2010 11:39:00 AM)


    i really like this poem :) good job! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 25, 2010



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