Puddles Poem by CHINNU MERIN MATHEW chinnuowns

Puddles

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You clear the trees and you shape the curves,
You built the roads and you fill its serves,

You put up traffic lights and you tight the eyes,
You buy the car and you crash its lights,

You clean it and you walk on it,
You dump on it and you smell it,

You dig it and you drive on it,
You neglect it and rain fills it,

You mock it and you get splashed,
You huddle it and puddles get clashed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 April 2018

Well conceived and nicely penned with conviction. Beautiful work of art embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Chinnu and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 April 2018

Write comment. A good start, Chinnu. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2018

You clean it and you walk on it, You dump on it and you smell it, ...puddles gets clashed. i was just imagining how much time you would have spent in rhyming this poem at the end of each line. fine poem dear poet. tony

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