Tuesday, April 10, 2018

Puddles Comments

Rating: 5.0

You clear the trees and you shape the curves,
You built the roads and you fill its serves,

You put up traffic lights and you tight the eyes,
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CHINNU MERIN MATHEW chinnuowns
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Chinedu Dike 13 April 2018

Well conceived and nicely penned with conviction. Beautiful work of art embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Chinnu and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 April 2018

Write comment. A good start, Chinnu. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2018

You clean it and you walk on it, You dump on it and you smell it, ...puddles gets clashed. i was just imagining how much time you would have spent in rhyming this poem at the end of each line. fine poem dear poet. tony

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