Pushing Up Daisy Comments

5 stars. To your readers: PUSHING UP DAISYS (the flowers) can mean: ' (adjective) DEAD', BUT I've never thought of it as an adjective, always thinking it an idiom. bri : )

Your style of capitalizing and using invisible punctuation marks 'work' in THIS poem, but, for me, would not 'work' in all I think.

It's a catchy story & entertaining. I like rhyming.& yous ARE GOOD. Your style of capitalizing

The structure in this poem is so beautiful!

Excellently crafted…The progression from the use of the inanimate word "lazy" to "I'll order the wreaths" is fantastic.

Hope to read more of your zingers.

Finally getting something done in her flat-lined state. What a mischievous imagination.