Thursday, June 30, 2011

Put The Gun In My Mouth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Put the gun in my mouth
Then shot away
Go on and do it
Have you nothing to say?
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Rachel McKnight
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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