Michael Walkerjohn

Gold Star - 13,957 Points (January 01 / Earth?)

Qualitative - Poem by Michael Walkerjohn

each flowery field
grows as an incomplete one
to heaven's delight

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku

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  • Michael Walkerjohn (1/27/2016 10:03:00 AM)

    Aloha Ratnakar Mandlik...

    I thank you good sir, for this visit, read, and complete and concise comment on this post... There are times when US humans being reject the beauty of those un-discussed imperfections found in the each of US... proudly choosing to dwell upon what we each conceive as perfection, as beauty, as desirable... not seeking to comprehend these less qualified characteristics in all of our Creator's divine issues and works... How very shallow of the individual... to consciously deny that all of creation is His domain... and those of US fortunate enough to overcome our educations, our dissatisfactions, our snide insecurities, these awareness's will, to become that completeness within US... however, this result will never make anyone of US, more beautiful or important in His eyes... and it is sinfully wicked to suggest otherwise... The best shall become the least... in the unfolding of the ends of this world... we may be that generation which will witness the awe of this rebirth... With all of my collective humbleness I thank you again...All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
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  • (1/26/2016 10:53:00 PM)

    A beautiful haiku. It is the Creator that leaves some or the other sort of incompleteness among His all creations. If we think of human beings in that regard we will find that no human is cent percent perfect.
    Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2016

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