Michael Walkerjohn

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Complexities - Poem by Michael Walkerjohn

one's anguish exhausts
this moments last pleasuring
as today's sun sets

Topic(s) of this poem: senryu


Comments about Complexities by Michael Walkerjohn

  • Michael Walkerjohn (9/21/2015 4:32:00 PM)

    Aloha Seema...

    Thank you for this visit, read, and for your enlightening comments... this is Senryu... or of humanity, rather that Haiku... of nature... There were and I trust there will be more or these moments in my lifetime... that brief hint of personal relief that comes after all is said and done... around our travelling sun... on mission to light the other side for a moment... it is in these times that personal pleasuring seems to have it most powerful seductions... and I do not for a second agree that you are such the newcomer and especially not the novice when it comes to words that work well together... so it would seem that these moments have eluded you? Not by personal choice I am sure... Perhaps, we could weave a few lines together and submit a collaboration? Just to test if IAM sensing correctly that it is that shyness which keeps your words on this subject quiet... Please pick out a few more of my posts and see if I could be in the same league as you with my thoughts and word works on subjects that you have thoughts of... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
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  • Seema Jayaraman (9/21/2015 11:37:00 AM)

    Is this a Haiku? The impending curtains down stage brings in such sweet agony...a bit complex for a newcomer n novice like me... (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/14/2014 2:18:00 AM)

    When the hotness of youth age is turned into coldness of old age, the pleasures finally melt down and end in pains.
    Being an old man I understand this poem like this. Great thought in only three lines shows capabilities of the poet....10.
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    Michael Walkerjohn(11/14/2014 7:14:00 AM)

    Aloha Akhtar...

    The age of the sage... as more men, and women, reach their age of reasoning, more knowledge is distributed out to the edges of our known'... a rather mellowing of the flesh moment... I have come into the first decade of these daze... and the words of work that I post have taken on the merits of my time served... I appreciate your trust in these few lines of ageless wit, that I have happened to pay attention to as they flew across the windows of my mind... Cheers, my friend and fellow bard... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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  • E Nigma (11/12/2014 11:41:00 AM)

    An orgasm, what's that! ? o_O Figured this had a double meaning of sorts, my initial thought was what Deepak said. Well along those lines anyways, but I decided to leave a more humorous comment. The good thing about both these comments is when readers come to visit this poem they can have 2 very different pictures juxtaposed in contrast. A sort of verbal assault to their delicate senses. (Report)Reply

    Michael Walkerjohn(11/13/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    Aloha E...

    O=]OOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM... or the juxtaposition of such an event: kinda like doubling down on a pat hand... and pulling a face card! Deepak really caught the message of this post... that made my year! The journey through the months of posts, eagerly awaiting that response that a grouping of words is designed to elicit from the readership of any and all such sites... Your humorous comment is also a blessing in de skies... well you know of what I suggest... Thanks for returning to continue the rapport... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

    Michael Walkerjohn(11/13/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    Aloha E...

    O=]OOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM... or the juxtaposition of such an event: kinda like doubling down on a pat hand... and pulling a face card! Deepak really caught the message of this post... that made my year! The journey through the months of posts, eagerly awaiting that response that a grouping of words is designed to elicit from the readership of any and all such sites... Your humorous comment is also a blessing in de skies... well you know of what I suggest... Thanks for returning to continue the rapport... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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  • (11/12/2014 3:18:00 AM)

    Very insightful indeed.....Michael.....at the turn of the day happy moments lived look no more with us when depleted with anguish......i think may be you are trying to drive home this point......amazing thought (Report)Reply

    Michael Walkerjohn(11/12/2014 6:19:00 AM)

    Aloha Deepak...

    Glad you stopped in my brother... and you have caught the big fish... my sentiments precisely... humans just cannot seem to let it all go... even while having their celestial photos snapped at sunset... really believe the green spot is just the sun falling of the edge of the earth? Thanks for your visit this day... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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  • E Nigma (11/11/2014 2:02:00 PM)

    Haha, I like the mystery of this one but my take on it is 1 tired guy/girl rubbing one out before they go to bed. You don't have to confirm or deny but if that is what this poem is saying then el oh el. Touche~ (Report)Reply

    Michael Walkerjohn(11/12/2014 6:26:00 AM)

    Aloha E...

    Similar but nope... I do understand how you are making that particular analogy... When was the last time you experienced that spinal column fluid empting orgasm? Yea, you read me now... In amerika, only the most deeply perverted minds have that privilege... Thank you for your visit, read, and for giving me the thoughts above... I kinda miss those daze... walking around all day thinking of all that minge... and smelling it everywhere I turned... something about coming of age in Waikiki... come on back as often as you can stand it... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 11, 2014



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