anonymous venus

Quality Glow - Poem by anonymous venus

im a river full of water, kinda like an ocean. It rains quiet often, the lighting strikes and makes the dark clouds go away. they dont stand a chance anyways... I forget pain, pain shouldn't be kept, it doesnt break me. When i sit home alone, i no longer fear but i feel alone so i let the smoke inside me and make my hurts vanish. The hurts my soul poses i Trimble and shiver... These memories i carry flow where i go. I float with love wherever i go, the warmth in my smile intriguse you, my talents are my emotions. i crush on the moon, the stars and the sun. I think im water, im not caged i am free

Topic(s) of this poem: feelings, homesick, mood

Poet's Notes about The Poem

im not good at writing but giving it abtry, idk what this one means. #feelings #crybaby #fear #hopefulandhopeless

Comments about Quality Glow by anonymous venus

  • (9/5/2015 4:42:00 AM)

    thank you, your comments means the world to me. i shall keep practising. paz (Report) Reply

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  • Charity Nduhiu (9/1/2015 12:11:00 AM)

    Your poem is great Venus. Nice start. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/26/2015 10:32:00 PM)

    Writing is a good release. Keep writing and posting, Venus. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 27, 2015

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