Quality Glow Poem by anonymous venus

Quality Glow

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im a river full of water, kinda like an ocean. It rains quiet often, the lighting strikes and makes the dark clouds go away. they dont stand a chance anyways... I forget pain, pain shouldn't be kept, it doesnt break me. When i sit home alone, i no longer fear but i feel alone so i let the smoke inside me and make my hurts vanish. The hurts my soul poses i Trimble and shiver... These memories i carry flow where i go. I float with love wherever i go, the warmth in my smile intriguse you, my talents are my emotions. i crush on the moon, the stars and the sun. I think im water, im not caged i am free

Wednesday, August 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,homesick,mood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
im not good at writing but giving it abtry, idk what this one means. #feelings #crybaby #fear #hopefulandhopeless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anonymous Venus 05 September 2015

thank you, your comments means the world to me. i shall keep practising. paz

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Charity Nduhiu 01 September 2015

Your poem is great Venus. Nice start.

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2015

Writing is a good release. Keep writing and posting, Venus.

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