Saturday, October 17, 2009

Queen Of My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why must I ever sit and wait
To seek the meaning of true love?
Are passion or desire my bait
To melt the Heart of my sweet Dove?
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John Knight
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 December 2009

‘…But wher to seek and what to find... [1] … Why must she keep her cards unseen...? [2] ‘…But please don't fear I won't be rough… [3] [1] Where and what: - where = in inside of inside of self and what = LOVE [2] Because women [[all] love to be enigmatic looking for intelligence to decipher read assess them… [Except in Platonic Love] [3] If you get answer or tick ‘true’ to above 2s no 3 will never come in the preview of LOVE Excellent write on romance and Ace King Queen Jack…are well penned and for QUEEN TEN Ms. Nivedita UK PS Near similar poem on chase: Checkmate Again

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Patti Masterman 17 October 2009

Sweet poem; but you know, I'm afraid you've tipped your hand now..(smile)

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